Great job bro
You're animations always outstanding with its bouncyness and smoothness but the issue I have with it, and its mainly how you shade just how you do it it either overly shaded or slightly, im not sure but it sometimes makes your characters seem oversaturaded with shade. And the light source is sometimes all over the place.
just some minor gripe, other than that impressive as always.
I did notice the light source thing watching through it later, when it was a bit late to fix. I usually dont shade characters coz its time consuming and obviously I forgot to think about where it should go. Anyway, cheers for the review man.
those hands
he fell in love with her hands thats cool but why did they kick him out over it.
Maybe:
The moisture cream was an aphrodisiac... that's what I was thinking anyway-
Regardless, nice script, though it was a slight bit predictable, funny none the less.
Such beautiful hands, suck elegant wrists, nice tits.
Great!
Animation quality = Great
Music = Great
Humor = Great
Voice Acting = Good
Notes : The guy's voice was kinda weird, needs some work.
Also Im new and have no idea how the rating system works (searched in forum, and constantly failed)