At least it's better than your older work
This was pretty good, and FAR better than I expected.
Artwork: Pretty good. This the actually the one thing (aside from animation movement) that you've consistently done well throughout your different animations. Well done.
Voice acting: Great new voice actors, James! Normally I don't like the sound of your voice and the microphone, but that's just me. When I noticed the new voice actors in this, however, I was pretty happy. Good job.
Humor: It's hard to describe the humor in this flash animation. I much rather prefer subtle humor though, cause it seems like you use very random, yet very obvious and predictable jokes and such. I don't consider it much of a problem, but sometimes when you're really trying to get a laugh outta me, you barely do anything at all. Then again, it doesn't help that I rarely ever laugh at anything unless it's extremely funny. Trust me, if you got me laughing to the point where my eyes water, you've got some pretty funny stuff.
OVERALL: Very good improvement from your previous videos. I would like to see more. You just need to improve on other things as well. Combine subtle humor with not-so subtle humor. Well, that's really all I can suggest.
+Good Voice Actors
+Good Artwork
+Good Animation Movement
-Not very good humor
-A tad bit predictable
^That would be the only way to really sum this up in a short way. I hope you like my review, and I also hope to see more from you in the near future.
-Powerdude964, OUT!
P.S, I also made a review of Through The Flash Portal. Please take my advice from it!
