I'm sorry, but this is bad. Really bad.
Where should I begin? Well first off, like many others have said, you are obviously trying to mimic Egoraptor's style in this video, what with the high pitched nonstop babbling of characters. Secondly, and perhaps more importantly, you're imitating someone who's current material is GARBAGE. This material isn't funny at all, and is more suitable to an audience of, let's say, 10 and under. Nothing about this is witty at all. In fact, the video was painful to watch since the start with the consistancy of the high pitch talking and severe lack of humor. In fact, I didn't even finish it. The only thing this video had was animation quality, that's it.
Overall: it takes a LOT for me to give out a zero; in fact, I don't think I have yet on this website. However, this video kind of needs it. I don't mean to belittle you or anything, but this video is a prime example of what not to do.