You've still got a ways to go
I liked the concept, but I couldn't enjoy this for four reasons.
1. The voice-acting, at times, sounded almost emotionless. Example: The spider's screams sounded like he didn't care too much about his life.
2. Art is bad in some areas. Example: The phone looked like a giant macaroni.
3. Laggy, as stated below. I had to turn the quality down considerably. It looked grotesque.
4. Too much silence in the background. Some music would have been nice.
Keep trying.