Not a great sequel
In comparison to the original, it was seriously lacking. The randomness that made the it's predecessor so great just wasn't there. Even though the artwork is simplistic, it still didn't seem up to the same quality with the original. You should be aiming for improvement when creating a sequel, not downgrading. Don't let this review discourage you from moving forward. Just spend more time writing your work. Your ideas are what people really enjoy, the animation is just a bonus.
Ehhhh........eh
I've been around this internet for WAY to long
between Stick Figures on Crack and asdfMovie (which if I remember correctly you had a part in) and....really just about every other flash that this was inspired by, it falls short
I want to say it's a lack of complete absurdity that the others accomplish well
this is just....plain? Sounds to harsh
the word "Uninspired" comes to mind
Not bad, but lacking in many departments
I though the voice acting was good, and the animation (for what you were going for) was also good
all in all, you seem to work better as a team with other animators and writers, asdfMovie made milk shoot out my nose, this did not even make me laugh.
~~Tyler~~
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felt like a take off of asdf vids, and this wasn't even that funny.
meh......
one of the few good ones was the rock paper scissors skit
Erm...
In all honesty, this just reminds me of those videos on Youtube called "try n0t 2 laugh!", and only someone below 10 could fail at. It's just corny jokes and unfunny random scenes. I how it's based in a way off of asdfmovie or others like it, but it's just lacking the humor. You can make replicas of things like asdfmovie if you have the right jokes and humor involved. This just didn't have it.
I can see how some of the jokes were meant to be funny, but you just didn't do what it took to make them at all funny.
Your voice acting was far better then the humor in this video, and everything was pretty good, so i'll rate you a 5.
Sorry, try better next time.