Overall it was alright
The style is crisp and your animation is ok, could have been a bit livelier. The humour was also a bit flat, the plot got dragged out for far too long. I must admit I was gonna turn it off after the first scene but my curiosity got the better of me. Im just saying you probably could have hit home if you made it shorter, it would have made the humour punchier. Keep it up though :)