needs more "oomph"
Normally I don't like advertising or "product placement," but this is a decent movie - cool concept, good drawing, and decent animation. However, it needs music, more dramatic camera angles, and more subscene cuts to make it more like a real commercial - in which case it could be quite cool, since it's definitely a nice premise.
My god...
Don't fucking make a cartoon abvertisment. I hope they paid you. Jesus Christ...
Meh
Its not that Bad good Graphics At least
it wasnt to good
it was ok,but it could of been alot better.
It was okay.
You could put a little more style into the letters than just using black plain arial bold font in a white bubble. Work on the style and add some more sound. Perhaps jungle-esque music during the chase?
Overall, I thought it was very cute and original.