Wow, the voice talent there...
Both of you sound spot-on for the English dubbers for later seasons. With that in mind, during that early battle both of them were supposed to sound like they hadn't hit puberty yet, especially Virginia.
Aside from that, I'd say this was bound to come along eventually...if you didn't do it someone else would have. Too easy to make fun of their BS lines in DBZ, but you still managed to make it humorous (to me at least, since my own bro didn't like it and we share a similar sense of humor).
I was waiting to see if you'd do a hilarious fighting scene like for your Chris & Harry anim, but despite no such thing occurring this was still amusing to me.
Well done.