Animation isn't in dispute
Kirb, your animation style has always been great, and it's always been improving. I've followed you ever since a friend of mine got me interested in TTA on fireball20xl, so let me just say, no one can complain about your animation. That part has gotten so good that people have gone from real reviews to nitpicking until the grand canyon forms out of a crack in the sidewalk.
Also, I really like your new voice actors. Especially for Rockoon, he never had a voice before except for some weird screaming. The new voice definitely fits the character.
Now to my own nitpicking. I didn't really like the french accent thing that rockoon did. It seemed a bit out of character. Same with the "You need some variety in your life" line. That being said maybe you have a new direction for him, I shouldn't really expect the same spambox as before.
And, the only other thing that bothered me were the two minor characters. You haven't usually included characters that "talked" in your series unless they were going to be funny or play a significant role in the story. I get that it was a joke that the pillar fell on the guy before he said what his sexual orientation was, it just wasn't more than a little funny.
Other than those two very minor aspects of the short, I love the new animation style, and your voice actors are great. I'll be impatiently waiting for TOME 2!