Fun!
The dialog was good and the animation wasn't too bad either! The only thing I would say is it's a little slow. It might help to change up the background music and sound effects (pet store would have birds and a buncha animal noises!). or change the camera angles around, it was the same the entire time. I'm no film expert, but these are a few things that might be a good idea.
Overall, really good! Best of luck to the rest of your series! I look forward to the next episodes!
Thank you for the feedback and such. While I understand that more dynamic camera angles would be awesome and incredible, we did this episode in 10 days instead of about 30 which is the norm so that should be taken into account.
Most of our other episodes have more camera angles.
Regarding the pet store sounds, they are annoying and most people don't want to hear animal noises throughout the episode so omitting that on our part should be considered a favor from us to you ; )
Thanks again for the kind words and keep watching!!
-Sean
Just like the employes at my local Walmart
walk in the store and everywhere you look freaks abound.
Pretty good
I would only suggest that there be more action
Thanks! Please keep in mind this isn't an "action series".
It's supposed to be minimum in action and should be considered a "dialogue-heavy" web series.
Lucky for you, the next episode is actually filled with action.
You have my word : )
-Sean
Finaaaaaly!
I saw sean and such in front page! Men(s) i cant describe it! ok im a big fan of this works of you, since you uploaded many episodes to newgrounds and now you get the FP, hope the people get the plot and get involved just like me. and this movie this one go to favs.
Congrats. Keep in the same tune!
(Oh oh and i love the Bruce Wayne joke)
Eh, not good, but not bad either.
All in all, this flash was -just slightly- below average from what I expect on Newgrounds, but certainly had much more potential than this. There were spots where the animation was really drawn out, and I mean REALLY drawn out. Just speed up the pace of the animation a tad bit and you should be fine. The core material which, again, I stress is the most important part of any flash, wasn't too bad. The humor wasn't slapstick, but rather well-written, which is a nice change of pace from what is usually posted on the front page.
Animation was good, plot was good, the humor...not so much, but not terrible. Examples: the inspector leaving to get more red pens was a little funny, the hippie waking up with a mangled hand was also a bit humorous, and the redneck complaining to Sean was probably the best part. The not very funny stuff was Ethan going on 20 second rambles, and also, certain scenes I felt could have been handled better I.E. Sean's reactions seemed too mellow for certain bits, I know my bosses would be going apeshit if an employee had 3 pounds of marijuana and a handgun.
Summary: This isn't a bad series at all, just had a couple bad spots in it, but overall, I'd say it was average. Worth watching, but not really worth watching more than twice. Most videos on here don't even get a 7 or above from me anymore, so don't feel down from getting this; if anything, feel a bit privilaged. There is potential to do better on this series, I know there is, good luck with your next submission.
Thanks for the insight. It's appreciated.
PS - the health inspector leaving to get "red pens" ties into the end of the previous episode (episode 9) which you may or may not have watched.
Season one is one long day at the pet store so you're supposed to be watching these in order to understand the plot / story 100%.