Different, and did not really see it coming
Could be much longer, but not bad for a first flash. A lot of the 1st flash I see are trash and not worth really looking at. You have some serious potential, just keep at it and one day you will produce the Daily, Weekly and best submissions ever.
*moving on*
-Respect to the newbie- :)
Thank you very much for this respectful and motivational review :)
Go idea but . . . .
Joke was flat delivery, not a good enough. I let you slide on the voice becuase twilight is probably one of the hardest ponies to do.
Simplistic but good idea, try again another time and might be inclined to give you a higher score.
Sidenote : Try a little bit longer and if you add Luna, Spike or Derby hooves then I Would give you a 10.
Full Version only please
While this may only be practice it still won't fly very well on this site. Finish it up and submit the full version instead. Also the writing still stays in the same spot after the letter falls.
:O I didn't notice that. It doesn't do it on the Youtube submission...
Good Try.
I know you said this is just a practice animation, but make it a little longer perhaps.