Flat World?
Somebodies ben reading. The last scene was a cop out and made me feel like dying is gonna be my only chance for escape, but over all this was a great idea executed rather well. Art comes with more time and dedication, so visually speaking this was a good start. Would like to see more games from you.
Thank you :) I sure would like to see more games of me to :D
Poorly Executed
The mechanics of the game seem very untested. The crude mouse control of "3D" figures are very unstable which makes reproducing any act impossible.
The story itself appears to be relevant only in the text for the puzzles are simple and don't follow much relation.
Nor do the graphics or art style appear to be relevant. The neon-green 3D shapes, the dark green platforms, blue backgrounds, ball people with triangle hats.
Even the poor control of language is blaring. I found poor syntax or grammatical errors in each level.
Why you would post this game to reclaim it as your own is beyond me.
But what shocks me even more is what NewGrounds has posted on the front page. This is not worth such publicity.
Beautiful
I really enjoyed playing this game.
The aesthetic, the mechanics and the music all melded together to make a really interesting game world. I really look forward to playing future flash games of yours. great job!
Thank you for your kind words :)
Good concept
I really like the concept. The story line needs work, and the gameplay needs to be tweaked. Add more levels, blah, blah, blah. I don't worry so much about the artwork. That all comes in due time. In the follow up spend more time on the gameplay attributes than the story line.
Thank you for this valuable feedback :)
Very cool and original...and...
I wrote Tom about your situation. Hopefully that will help. I noticed in a few places you said "someone should fix the situation" ... while it sucks someone ripped your game, there are plenty of channels to voice your situation to. Simply stating that someone should fix it is a bit presumptuous (of course, in this case I was happy to help), but in the future, you should take the initiative to contact the necessary authorities/admins, rather than simply stating your issue and waiting for the world to fix it.
Thank you for your kind comment.
But I did message authorities about the situation and waiting for response.