It was simple.
There is at first glance nothing special about this. Really simple sprite animation. Music that was not yours. Simple cheesy story that scrolled lazily across the screen. Yet, yet it was strangely heart warming. The pacing was done wonderfully. The explanation of the sprites was endearing. The progression and timing are what made this. I mean it truly is a simple and by all means should be a lack luster piece. But somehow. Somehow you made it special. I have no idea how or why, but you made something... magical. Maybe I'm a softy, maybe It's just me being biased because I love this song as I do most classical pieces. Maybe it's because even though it's simple you can just tell you were really trying. It actually brought a tear to my eye. So take this as a bitter sweet review. You have much to improve on. I also did not like the bongos in the end. But, I'm giving you a 10 and a 5 because it's obvious tried. And you managed to make something memorable. Good Job.