Frustrating.
I've seen quite a few of your flashes - you have made some great animations. Sadly, this isn't one of them.
I clicked this from the front page before realizing it was by you. It's a great concept, but I felt that the flash kind of fizzled out halfway through - and unlike your recent shorts featuring "the Manwhore", which were at least random enough to elicit some laughs, this one just seemed to go nowhere. I did go and read the comic that was drawn, and while this does work as a comic, it doesn't work as a standalone flash. Hope to see more great flashes from you soon.