ok I guess
It's ok but, you should of included at least some mini games for your avatar but, I do like your drawing style, and anthoer thing there should be an option for diffrent music because A: THE music just gets so boring after 3min. B: even if you turn IT off the music you get that empty atmosphere of lonelyness.
TIP FOR PLAYER: if YOU GET BORED OF THE MUSIC just plug in your mp3 or other music creating device and play that instead.