Nice
I liked the storyline a lot you weren't trying too hard wich i liked and the voice actors were amazing so for me this would be a 10 cant wait till the next episode.
Reviews for "TOME Episode 01"
Bring backs some memories
This is truly amazing and i love how you included some of the other non main characters from TTA
Finally.
I've been waiting for more from Alpha and the others from TOME for a long time, so this is a welcome sight. :)
As for the episode itself, I love the new style, trading sprites for animation, and the voice acting is very well done. I am a bit bothered by the pacing and character establishment. They seem to be a bit rushed, which isn't good given the reprisal of the characters apparent histories together. Alpha also seems to start off with almost complete control of Kagemamoru, as opposed to the original where it made him view himself as some kind of god, and accepts Kagemamoru's power more out of a desire for power than a naive desire to help someone like in the original. Over all, I'd say we need a bit more explanation of the characters relationships with each other, and the pacing should be adjusted a bit, but I'd love to see more of this rebooted version, and I'm sure that plenty of other people would as well. :)
Great Animations, Overdone Story
The animation is great, and so is the music. Nylocke is hilarious, and the rest of the cast make me smile. I love .hack, which seems to be your inspiration for this world and story, but that's okay.
The story being the only problem I have with it, I think TOME deserves a 9.
Awesome
superbly create like the new voice actors better then TTA but both great