FREAKING AWSOME!
I liked it but im kinda pissed off the fact that its a year wait -__- like i cant wait that long. Anyways if you guys need help on the next year flash contact me id like to help out.
Reviews for "Jack: Episode 1"
Pretty Good
Just think you should make another one instead of waiting a year to make it.
Could be better
I would suggest a better creature design in general those appendages don't really look well...threatening maybe have them come from the forearms or lose them completely. The stitch mouths becoming toothy grins got on my nerves you should just stick with one and I recommend the teeth more emotions can be conveyed that way. A different voice actor would be nice at least for the narration.
Ehhh
I know you want this to be some kind of profound thing, but that doesn't work when the main character is such a flat smartass.
Interesting
I looks like it would be a game, and a fun one too.