Wonderfully Done
I'm happy to see everything turned out just right in the end.
The beginning was lovely with Death's Demon entrance at the clock tower. The dramatic thunder following his rather epic fail was a nice way to show that this flash won't be very serious.
I didn't like how Death chose to abuse his touch with the little kid, and, incidentally, with the nice lady. Deaths are funny to me, but these ones with decent, nice characters just isn't funny.
Fat Bastard's lock and load scene was hilarious. I loved his belt moment particularly, as I laughed at the hilarious contrast between Muscle Man and Fat Bastard.
The scene with the children was very, very sweet. I liked how you used that to frame Fat Bastard's third defining moment.
I could have cared less about the fight scene, though I did find it a nice end to the cartoon.
Overall, excellent styling, good sound effects, and wonderful animation. The story telling was quite a notch up, too!