Great game, just a few very small points.
Loved the game, great controls and the design was well thought out.
It was hard but never got frustrating or impossible and if i couldn't finish a level it was because i hadn't thought about it long enough not because of poor design or unresponsive controls.
The only teeny tiny criticism i would give is on some of the asthetic qualities of the game. The setting is great and the music really sets the tone and atmosphere but for some reason the main characters design just didn't sit right with me.
The running animation seemed a little odd and the general design of him sort of came off as a bit too 'cute' to me.
The only reason his design and animation stood out is because of the design of the rest of the game wich is quite dark and well done.
The enemies looked particularly excellent and detailed which made the main character's odd look stand out even more.
I understand that he is supposed to be an 'average joe' kind of hero but...like i said he's a little too cute and nice for this game...just my thoughts though.
Also i agree with the rest of the reviers in saying that the ending is very poor.
A simple escape sequence would've been fine or just having him walk out into the sun or something but the whole 'it was only a dream thing' really makes it seemed rushed and forced.
All in all a fantastic game and a full 5 from me.
Can't fault anything in the mechanics, controls or level design but just a couple of asthetic qualities kept it from being a perfect 10.
Looking foreward to more work from you!