hahahahaha
Great twist.. love it.
hahahahaha
Great twist.. love it.
spectacular!
it's superb, eerie and downright dirty! well done, good sir! well done!
NOW
I DEMAND A MOVIE I SHALL FOND YOU or find someone who will
Awesome
Creepy without being generic. The whisper at the end scared me cuz i was wearing headphones.... Great story too!
very good
soo very very Edgar Allen Poe-ish i enjoyed it quite alot very creative and well done poem you seem to have quite the knack for it soo keep them coming