Reviews for Avania: episode 1 part 1

[sorsorsor]

Bad

I must say this is bad. I'm only watching this cus it was on daily 3rd. Hope that you'll do better than this. Good luck

BTW I hate this gaylike style. If possible please create more man like man.

Deer50 responds:

If you do like it don't watch -.-
Flash is a hard program to draw in. It alters whatever you draw. You don't know what your talking about when you say it's "bad" because I see you don't have any flash animations in your profile. I would like to see you do better.
And what's with the "gay-like style." That makes me think this is coming from some 10 year old.

[LewToons]

interesting

this is pretty good - - i think your ideas and drawing skills are there - but whats missing is a bit of production value - - i think if you spent an extra few days to get different voice actors (all the voices are the same person ..least thats what it sounds like), and take a second look at the pacing you would have a really solid thing here

also consider adding music or ambient noise? - - but overall a good start, if you can stick with it ; )

Deer50 responds:

thanks. I wanted to add a soundtrack. But I don't want to steal anybody's music.

[mightclark]

Interesting

Overall It's good, a few tips here
Voice acting especially the main character needs to be more fluent, currently it's like he's reading from a book he's never read before and it's somewhat apparent, to improve this just have whoever is voice acting him basically repeat the lines to themselves while trying to get more emotion into each line.
Your frame rate movement is alright It could be improved a little by speeding it up and adding more frames, but you'll get use to it the more you animate.
Graphics could be improved with more shadings but it's acceptable for now.
Gonna go watch your next part, overall I still like your work.

Deer50 responds:

thanks

[kungfumonkey8]

I enjoyed this... save the abrupt ending.

Someone must have given you a really bad review, because i think you are waaay to hard on yourself.
the art isn't bad, it's unique. though some flash looks cleaner than others, they often lack the personality of work animated frame by frame.
the characters are colorful and the plot is alright.
please conclude this one, i will find it.
oh, and you may need to get some friends to do voice acting, if there were multiple voices, it only sounded as one person (you i'm assuming)
again, too hard on yourself. you're talented, just give yourself the time you need to produce ^_^

Deer50 responds:

thanks ^^
I'm a very cynical person. So I keep thinking everyone's going to think it's bad. I need to work on that >.<
As for voice actors I've got someone to help me with one of the characters.:)

[sleeeeep]

little rough looking

but not bad. work on your voice acting and get better equipment. but good stuff so far