pretty colours! :D
and really good animation! good job on all the backgrounds and frame by frame, it really paid off :D and cute song
Reviews for "The Star Song"
erm...kill me now.
the one star is for the slight errection i got from this ;) other than that... what is this gay little song?
OscarBaldwinStudio responds:
hahahahaha
-_-
No, realy WTF ?!?
Yep, all like Mario Galaxy
Really reminiscent of Mario Galaxy. It may just be a coincidence, but it is the really same story with almost no differences.
For the animation and the sound... It's... Okay, but nothing amazing , and the little girl sometimes looks like a granny.
OscarBaldwinStudio responds:
yeah, she did go off model a lot to be fair. But then, i'd like to see you do any better mateyboy
Stella parva
Nice animation skills, but it's not perfect. People giving you straight 10s are not being critical. Personally, I wasn't very emotionally touched by your work, which I guess was your goal when creating this. The style does not match with the feeling of the song. Too comical maybe, and your camera angles are generally simplistic, only showing general scenes instead of focusing into more relevant, catchy details. You have some good scenes though. I was impressed by the house unfolding! Undoubtfully that was the best cutscene of the animation. About the plot: It does not enter the mind as easily as it should. I think this is because the animation style is a bit sketchy and some things happen too quick. Maybe there is an excess of scenes which want to contibute to the overall candor of the work, but instead make it sloppier, harder to follow at times.
Overall this is a nice, colourful flash, that can touch the heart of a certain kind of audience. Although practice would make your drawing skills better (to a lesser extent, animation too needs perfectioning), the general impression is alright. Looking forward to seeing more of your stuff.
PS, the replay button is not working for me.
OscarBaldwinStudio responds:
Yeah, I have no idea why the replay button doesn't work, I'm trying to fix it now.
I actually agree with you to an extent.
I think i'm a pretty decent draftsman. I like to think I can draw anything if given enough time but then time is a luxury you dont get in animation. Not when your one man trying to make a cartoon with about 80 individual scenes. Plus i'm better on paper than a tablet. I think maybe I don't spend enough time on the inbetweens so stuff wobbles a bit between the keys.
I think my composition is not simplistic but interesting and dynamic. Did you not see the bit where her and the star avoid the asteroids. That uses a background with 6 point perspective which wobbles the whole time.
It's funny that you like the house transformation the best. It was probably the easiest bit to do.