kinda random...
but it was amusing though,quite good
(how do I end this review I don't know what to say, I'm not sure what to say or type, write or something so...I'll just press submit review THE END)
Reviews for "Sketchy Stories"
Lost it
It was great and hilarious until about halfway through when the Monty Python-esque 4th wall was broken. Took to much time to deliver the ending.
Well.............................
That storyline went absolutly nowhere.
Too much random stuff.
too long
was funny at 1st but became too repetitive.
that's just silly
alright, the animation isn't really that fantastic but i realize that was the intention, however it being simplistic did not help the fact that you were really just pulling things out your ass. which might have been funny but I can't say you have a very vivid imagination.
wow that sounds really negative, so lets make this less personal and break this thing down:
animation:
3 - as i said it's pretty simple, but simple can be good. simple can be creative and funny. it is neither in this case. it seems you were uninterested in doing anything but animate your story, it felt very static and lazy.
story:
0 - note i had to stop the movie when you started going on about how the guy ate the icecream truck, christ, stop that, it's not funny.
voice acting:
5 - you have a very expressive voice, i would suggest you start with a script next time, you could do some very comical stuff, especially for cartoons
you could have done with some background music also, and maybe tone down the voice volume just a tad, i feel like you are screaming into a mic.
congrats on daily second.