Not Bad :)
There was some parts where I felt like it went a little too slow, but I may just have been reading too fast. Or maybe there was just too long of a pause inbetween switching scenes. Its hard to say, but there was a problem with flow. Other than timing, I found the story to be fairly amusing. Good Job :)
Yeah, I too felt like I had stretched some things out, although I left them in for the slower readers. Also, I notice that whenever I switch to a new Scene within a Flash it kind of has a skip of music or sound.
But thank you for Critiquing, I'll be sure to take those into account in my next cartoons.
A fun minecraft story
Nice film I think you could ad in some voices for the creepers you have some sparkling ideas that made this a fun movie here, An exciting story of minecraft that you have designed here and A fun minecraft story as it has some interesting moments here in this one so really nice work indeed, I like your style here and a great movie submission.
~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
I think you could ad in some voices for the creepers
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Decent in some ways.
It was fairly long, and that's always worth recognition in a flash movie,
But it had some major flaws that brought it down, Some of the art was occasionally dodgy or inconsistent, and the menu buttons were unlabelled,
Still a strong effort however.
Yeah, I know. Some things I wasn't happy with myself, but overall I think I did a very good job. Thanks for the Critique, I will be sure to take those into account with the next 2 Cartoons I am working on.
too much effort for this garbage. 0