Well, I'm conflicted
On one hand I know how good it is to be able to use someone else's work for a launching point when learning. But on the other hand this is the game's intro ver batum just sketched out. It's hard to give any real credit beyond a pat on the back for putting some effort in to it.
I guess you summed it up yourself with your own "*Thanks for 3rd daily! I don't deserve it, but that's great!*" comment. It's a nice piece of work, but I don't really feel like this should be on frontpage. It's really more like practice, something you can show other people and be proud of but not claim as your complete own.