Woop.
The sound played when it finished loading scared me half to death. Holy shit. That woke me up.
Overlapping the voice over newscaster was annoying, and made it hard to understand. I know what you were trying to achieve with it, but it fell short. Maybe lower the volume of one voice significantly when the other comes over.
The music randomly stopped while they were on the plane, which seemed strange considering how well music was used before that.
Overall, very good. I look forward to the full movie. Keep it up!