Good :D
Choppy yes, you've got a good deal of improvement but I'm sure you'll get there. Regardless of the choppy animation the style is quite good, better than some out there :D it gets better near the end, obviously due to you getting to know it better. I like the weight idea, falling through the ground.
all in all 7/10 - only because of the animation. You can improve buddy
4/5
WOW!
Holy shit, I didn't expect you to improve this much! Your last flash was terrible, but this actually wasn't too bad! It was very entertaining, and almost original in a way. I loved the Mag agent with 2 deagles, and how he got owned with his own gun. Pretty nice.
Now the bad things. The movements were all over the place, but some were smooth. Try to slow them down and keep everything in sync, as it looked pretty sloppy. The effects (which were obviously taken from MC10) were incorporated pretty well. Keep it going!
thanks i like in depth reviews :)
Huh?
I like it, but what the heck is happening?
that was so f***** short.
yeh i had to rush it to meet the deadline :(
not as good as i thoght it was going to be
Aw :(