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Reviews for "Zelda: Day and Night"

A good start.

I like this. It's definitely a great start of what, I hope, is more to come. I like the artwork. I really think the work with shadow makes it look slick, but the odd, triangular-shaped light patch in the middle of the field threw that off a bit. It just looks odd every time I see it. It's not exactly a big deal since it didn't draw me away from the story much, but it still did when it shouldn't. That small detail aside, everything looked great.
The animation was alright. I would have liked to see Link's movements be a little smoother, but it's fine overall.
Also, I know the reason behind it being a short clip, and that's fine, but it felt like there was only half a story told and it cut out right before the climax. I understand that the fighting wouldn't fit in with what the assignment was about and would have been extra, unnecessary work in an assignment, but it almost feels like I'm being teased with here comes the exciting part as denoted by the battle theme then fade to black.
On a more positive note, the use of sounds and music was well done to shape the atmosphere perfectly. You show that you can tell a story and set its mood.
I hope my review doesn't sound harsh, I really do like the clip, it's great for what's it's purpose was. I just get very picky when I review something and wanted to review this as more of a featured product than an animation exercise.

All in all, I think this is great for a first flash, and if this is where you're starting then I can't wait to see how your work will look in the future.

Umm........

Unless this is unfinished then it wasn't a very good vid. If it was supposed to be funny then it wasn't to me. I can see how it might have some humor to those who haven't played OoT (Ocarina of Time), but other than that the vid was too short and the wording wasn't so great. For future refrence you can put the subs in a box like OoT. That would keep the originality in it. On the other hand I do have to give you props for the artwork and animation. They far exceeded average. Overall I was dissapointed due to the vid being too short, didn't even show Link fight or anything, and because of the score it has I was expecting more. You should definitely keep trying though cause you definitely have potential. I vote a 4/5 and a 6/10 for the animation and artwork. Try to take this as positive critisism please?

i love the art...
but i to short...

Didn't like it.

The animation was alright, but even then, just the style of drawing AND animation was ripped right off Granfaloon, and if you didn't take it from him, or at least admit to have been inspired by his work, then you're lying. The humor wasn't great at all, and maybe that's all it was, just an animation test. But it would've been better to see YOUR style, not someone else's.

Thought Granfaloon did this

If your gonna make art that good and only make it about 10 seconds long i can't give you more then a 4 it's nice yo did it as a school project but i know lots of people who have used school projects to make something awesome.

Good Art (I thought granfaloon did this)

Sounds are little off too short.

lulles responds:

The animation should have been only 15 seconds long, it wasn't my decision. I just took the liberty to make it a little longer.