Missed the boat
It was pretty funny and your art was decent, but the animation wasn't top notch. What really hurt you was the fact that Starcraft 2 isn't really relevant anymore. It came out over a year ago, and Heart of the Swarm is still a long ways away.
Meh wasn't funny too me
I think it's mostly due to being very tired and hungry, but honestly the voicing just wasn't funny, not like it is in the awesome series where they go beyond typical voicing just sounded like you were bored, plus the animaion wasn't very good at all. Now if there was an awesome episode on the zerg I bet I would be laughing, but I was just bored half way through. Sorry.
ehh
it was ok