Awesome!
I love the dark, almost gothic feel. it gave me chills! The story line was excellent and I hope you do more like this! xxx
Reviews for "The Old Ash Tree"
This was quite good but
As far as terror goes i am getting rather sick of death being the only concept touched upon to incite fear; its not like most of us don't fear death but we all die anyway so so your story can only really be as frightening as life itself. I'm a big fan of David Firth and Poe because they really utilize the concept I'm speaking of, if you noticed they usually don't even bother with the killing off of a main character (or at least use the death as the frightening part) but rather you are entirely creeped out by the oddity and insanity of it all. Also i do believe the only scary movie (or full lengthed regular film that isn't a cartoon i guess) that i will honestly admit to instilling fear was donnie darko, not because he died but because your entire sense of reality and your philosophy thereof was thrown off. Furthermore if you do use death you should try and make it so the characters are really memorably and make the story longer, so that it becomes terrible and relatable when physical harm is done. I dunno you seem like a pretty good author but i figure that i'll die some day anyway so why do i care if its a tree that does it or old age- all the same to me.
Other than that the whispering was kind of annoying, but really the entire atmosphere you created was very creepy and worthy of praise.
old ass tree
that´s about it..
Well...
What a bastard tree!
Wow!
That was scary! I'm glad I watched this during the day lol