Good One
I definitely agree with Erce for the mostpart, however I agree with Ace that it does just kind of start and it is also very short... I give it a 9/10 as its well done and I like it, but the lack of a buildup does hurt it a sec... If I have to make a suggestion for a buildup then I'd think of something like a few chords then a short 1-2 second pause and then pick up at the beginning, nothing climactic or long.