I didn't care about the length
That was really well done for a 15 second flash, the writting didn't stay up long enough though
Reviews for "The End: Teaser"
um...
a bit short.... too short... i like your flash though.
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No wonder Yum Yum Poo is #1..that was shite!!!
Might be an ok series
The blonde guy tht the trailer zero'ed in on just didn't grab my attention, he looked good, but he seemed a litle too stick slayery, like you didn't even try to think of a brand new character.
Big Changes Needed
The whole point of a trailer is to intice the audience into thinking "fuck me I need to see this thing". However, this trailer did not have that effect on me. Some of the other reviews summarized its weaknesses pretty accurately. Nonetheless, I have a couple suggestions which may help improve it.
1. Add a voice-over to the text. I am a moron and I don't want to read all that shit.
2. A little longer, and more descriptive as to what you movie/game/whatever is really about.
3. Jack the volume up so I don't have to.
4. Include a release date (or apporximate).