Nice animation, terrible reviews.
Some people don't understand the difference between a review and a comment. This isn't youtube. Anyhow i enjoyed your cartoon, the animation was smooth and the little fbf that there was, was done well. The style looked professional and the sketchy outlines with washed out colours worked well. The black and white background was a bit of a cop out but it looked fine. The punchline was good but you should have an end screen with a replay button rather than the animation immediately going back to the play button. The fact that the onion is visible on the play screen is a little off putting. All in all it's a nice little short, good stuff!