al final te le olvidaste colocarle la sangre.
Nice ;)
Reviews for "The fall of the mafia"
madnesia19 responds:
xD lo se
Amatuer but...
Not exactly top quality and it looks more like something made for fun rather than serious stuff. However i believe practice makes perfect and people have to start somewhere.
There were some flaws i noticed. The blood on the knife didn't seem to match too close to the knife(it looked like MS paint stuff) while there were some writing mistakes. It also doesn't make sense he didn't shoot the bearded man but rather stare at him till he got shot.
If you plan on continuing with the same man,a head shot wouldn't work well since people tend to die when shot in the head. If not then you can ignore the first sentence of this paragraph.
I'd suggest you try to do some better scripted stories for your animations(if you continue) and make sure it's better than the last one(since you'd learn the mistakes you made and can correct/avoid them for your next project).
It was nice
I enjoyed it but there´s something i don´t understand. Why does he gets shot by the guy with the beard? Why didn´t he just kill him before being shot? And then why the shot dissappears by the end (there´s no blood)?
madnesia19 responds:
Sorry, when i finished the animation, i saw that LOL.
so so
I can't say I like MC very much anyway, though at its best some MC material has talent, including Krinkels own stuff.
This one has little new to offer and is not very well executed (excuse the pun!)
What is LMHB?
Like many of the poorer MC, people just stand there with guns in thier hands not using them.
The text is sometimes difficult to read, and poorly spelt. The white line/gap on the right is clumsy, exposing beyond the edge of the movie at points. Why not have the credits music running quietly through the film?
I did like the joke "doing another killing spree" ! and the touch of saluting the tape of his mission.
madnesia19 responds:
LMHB are the quality buttons
Fun
Just like the older versions of Madness.
I love how subtle he is, shooting the guy behind him the first time. The boss with the guards also.
10/10
5/5
Well done.