Dear sir
This is perhaps the worse thing i have seen in years. Because I have done numerous projects on animations, i know this as a fact. The fullmetal series is a masterpiece and your work shouldn't even be compared to it. Just look at the sloppy workmanship, it's as if a six year old took the art work of his retarted cousin and tried to copy it. You seem to lack major motor skills and perhaps should just cut off your hands so such things are never again seen by the eyes of man. For having two months experience, you seem to be drawing worse than with someone with no experience. You say you made in this four days? Ha, I make better things in half an hour. You didn't even mention the most important fact about the series and therefor fail. For some reason you didn't even talk about the younger brother, Al, who is the main character and the reason why this show is called "fullmetal." Btw why did he lose his leg? in the original he keeps his leg throughout the ENTIRE story and loses his arm in the beginning. You sir, are a troll.