Has potential...
Keep it up..
Reviews for "Robby's crib"
Lol what
I'm willing to bet one day you'll be a pretty damn popular animator. A funny one too. But right now the quality of your animation and ideas are just lacking.
On the plus side; You're working well with the characters you've created. You're not trying anything too flashy and it's paying off. A lot of beginner animators mess themselves up by trying to create incredibly complex characters to make their animations look good (and in turn, end up fucking it over). You've taken a simple design and really homed in on how to animate it to your advantage. So good work there.
Your animations feel like their being created for the sake of being created. I did the same when I first started animating on Newgrounds. I just created new shit just so I could submit something, and great ideas and funny scripts came second to just rolling something new out. I really think you could create something hilarious and high in quality if you sit down and think up a few jokes before starting.
This just feels like you're making it up as you go along.
I'm sure I'm going to see a lot more from you, though.
Cheetoh responds:
Finally someone who thinks like me. My friend and I try so hard to make good scripts. I have an idea set, but I have to right the script.
Great
You got great humor added you to my favorite artist list
I lol'd
Good job! :3
Short and funny.
Good work, looking foward to seeing more.