I grinned at the ending.
I was actually more amused by this than I expected I'd be.
If I were you, with your next submission I'd try to spruce up your preloader page a bit--it doesn't convey that the artwork gets better, so it may lead people to discount it without giving it a chance.
I had alot of ideas for the preloader page as I'm aware the initial sight is what will persuade people to press 'play' - but after one too many hours of watching useless tutorials on YouTube I just figured I'd make it a mission for next time... glad it was enjoyable! The whole "Its funnier than I thought it was going to be" thing was kinda what I was going for haha!
What was that?
Is that for teens???Are you kidding???
And what's a point of that cartoon?
But if you made that for adults,you should been put that for adult people,not for teens.
Animation-5 rating,plot-0 rating.
Total-5 rating
I somehow doubt a talking clump of faeces is adult orientated. So I set it to teens.