Oh young love!
I liked this guy. I did that once, only i said "I love you" and she laughed at me for 3mins straight, actually rolling on the ground, laughing. I actually had time to light a cigg, and crouch down, realizing how fucking retarded the situation was, my heart lying in shattered pieces on the ground around her.
So.. Ahem!
I've always been a fan of monologues. They are hard to make, hard to pace, and the jokes has a tendency to become hard to get. In short, they are very special. I saw no real flaw in this. It was smooth, nicely paced, and a very clear punchline.
I liked it. Alot.
Have a cookie!