HOLY SHIT
your a genius
Reviews for "Imaginary Coolness"
The Gay Cow
The middle spot looks like a dick xD
Great job man!
Completly Accurate!
You really hit this one perfectly. The point being made, the dialogue, everything is exactly right. I think many people (including myself) will be able to relate to this and the character and will totally connect with this. At minimum this will raise memories. The humour, of course, added even more to this and the girl immediatly saying yes and bending over at request are also easily related to, as anyone who in been in the guy's position will have had similar thoughts/experiences ;) Even the Egoraptor face (which may be interpreted by some as simply Curry favouring) is totally right and has value.
It has been a long time since I have seen a flash that I've watched and genuinly smiled and said "Yeah, that's right" and that was my actual reaction, so thank you :)
Seeing as someone below me shared a memory, I'll share one of mine.
When I was in college, there was this girl who I was friends with. I'd asked her out before, but got turned down. I had fantasies like the guy in the flash did, for months. I finally set a day. Stupid me told her friends before hand, so it turns out she knew beforehand, runining any "Romantic suprise" I thought I had (or some similar crap. Yeah, I was awesome and she loved me in my imagination, just like this flash) When I actually got around to my chance, I had her whole class watching and it ended badly. Worst moment of my life so far.
I don't know if anyone will bother to read that. I don't really care to be honest. It just made me feel good to type it :/
Cheers
omg
its like im meeting myself. but usually it takes a lot more time for my daydreaming :(
Oh young love!
I liked this guy. I did that once, only i said "I love you" and she laughed at me for 3mins straight, actually rolling on the ground, laughing. I actually had time to light a cigg, and crouch down, realizing how fucking retarded the situation was, my heart lying in shattered pieces on the ground around her.
So.. Ahem!
I've always been a fan of monologues. They are hard to make, hard to pace, and the jokes has a tendency to become hard to get. In short, they are very special. I saw no real flaw in this. It was smooth, nicely paced, and a very clear punchline.
I liked it. Alot.
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