Cool!
Fun little song, easy to enjoy. Keep working on the complexity of a song, there isn't too much supporting the song itself, but keep at it until you are satisfied with the final product.
Cool man!
-SuperDrummer146
Reviews for "omni world [REMIX]"
zerofalse responds:
thanks man, yeah, ive still got alot to learn. haha. i suppose it could have been a bit longer o_0. anyway's glad u liked it though, keep on makein ur songs too!
they rock
Not bad
I wasn't a fan of the beginning, but it got better as the piece progressed. I would suggest that you add more complexity to your piece. Adding more parts to it, and diversifying the instruments.
The remix sounds like it could have some potential, it just needs a little more developing. It's a good start.
Keep up the good work!
5/5
If you've got a second I'd love to get your opinion on my music!
zerofalse responds:
thanx for the advice! ill try to add more complexity and stuff to my newer songs for sure. yeah man, ill check out your songs! no prob
thx for the review
Good
Dont worry bout what blackplastic said, I remix my own songs all the time. Its fun and helps you improve as a songwriter. The production and sounds in this song were all good but what needed work was the arrangement. I find that starting a song off with the bass just by itself rarely works. If you are going to do an intro like that I would suggest starting higher up in the harmonic range such as a midrange sound. A bass usually wont grab someone's attention unless it is supporting a melody. So ya, thats my two cents. Hope I could help.
zerofalse responds:
hey man, thanx. im glad i remixed this song and made it sound better.but still, i could always improve.. there's not such thing as perfection in my opnion. about that bass.. yeah in the back on my mind i was thinking about the into and how i could possibly make it better. im glad you pointed it out because now i can see those little imperfections about my music. thanx for the review! and advice =)
Ahh... much better.
You have much better drum works in this piece compared to the first one. Good job on the whole percussion aspect.
As mentionned before, this song could use a bit more melodies and diversity. I really thought that the remix would be something completely different though. Like upbeat crazy stuff or something.
I guess you wanted a better version of this song here. Why wouldn't you, i mean it's a good song and a better version wouldn't hurt anyone :D
Good job on this song, keep up the good work!
zerofalse responds:
thanx man. yeah, i wanted to improve on this song eventually. there were these little imperfections so to speak about the first one that made me cringe when i heard it and i was thinking "i gotta change this" lol. anyway thx for the reveiw man. ill still work on mastering my music, and makeing it a little longer and stuff =)
Ok
This isn't too bad of a song. It has sort of a hip-hop feel to me with a techno side to it. It didn't have much diversity in it though, you could have changed it up a little bit.
zerofalse responds:
yeah i realized that.. perhaps i could have changed a bit more things up, anyway thanks for the review! =)