Not bad
I wasn't a fan of the beginning, but it got better as the piece progressed. I would suggest that you add more complexity to your piece. Adding more parts to it, and diversifying the instruments.
The remix sounds like it could have some potential, it just needs a little more developing. It's a good start.
Keep up the good work!
5/5
If you've got a second I'd love to get your opinion on my music!