It was pretty good
It was an interesting take on the fairytale i thought. Your characters were pretty cool and it all flowed together pretty well.
Im not really into furry stuff so that was kind of a turn off for me. Particularly the end.
I think the motion stretches on some of the parts were a little rough. Almost unnecessary. Like when he's pounding on the door for instance, I dont think you need the speed blur on his arm. You can probably get more bang for your buck by having it wind up and go straight to the pound and concentrate on the recoil. If that makes sense.
Good stuff, looking forward to more of your work.