That was really good
I really liked that. It was a little predictable, but other than that, I really enjoyed it
Reviews for "Green riding hood"
gusana responds:
hahahaha yeah... everyone knows the story XD
Good
The animation was good. All of the characters are well drawn and the art style is original. The presentation of the title in the beginning was interesting. As the male protagonist walks along, the title appear behind him. Little things like that really add to an animation. The part where the female character is sniffing the air is also very well done. Other parts of the animation would be better if they were as fluid as that scene, but the graphics themselves remain fairly well-drawn throughout.
There is a small animation mistake around ten seconds in where a small dot remains on the leg of the table after the protagonist's arm moves past it. The shadow as the female character leans over the protagonist and the protagonist's facial expression before he becomes conscious do look slightly odd. Her shadow makes her look like she only has one eye and his eyes look a bit far apart whilst closed.
The sound was good. The music matches up with the animation well. The feelings the music conveys matched up with the events of the story in a way that keeps it interesting. Many animators make the mistake of tacking on music that simply does not fit the animation.
The plot was good. Comedic moments such as the female character being introduced by accidentally being drawn by the protagonist and him being annoyed by her dancing around him whilst he is tied up keep the animation funny.
The best parts of this flash are definitely the unique art style and the facial expressions of the characters. The facial expressions made by the protagonist, especially his eyes, are funny without being over the top.
gusana responds:
Thank you very much, I really apreciate your critique, it really make me want to keep going my work on animation n_n
I like it
Nice recreation of Red Riding Hood. I like the concept of the art. The animation is incredibly fluid. And nice twist at the end there. Well scripted and good job.
gusana responds:
Thank you!
I enjoy this.
I like how it's not just a weird spoof of Red Riding Hood, like I thought it was at the beginning. I also liked the end, just keep working on it, and you'll become a great animator.
gusana responds:
Thanks!!!
wow!
hahah very funny well done, also very original xD, lol me cago de la risa hahaha, le diste al clavo en esa, no importa k seas ilustradora, tienes un talento en flash! keep it up, you got talent!!!
gusana responds:
muchas gracias!!!