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Reviews for "Cookies, deceit, and such"

Good work!

Really nice little bit. Though I will say first off that the loading screen title does not match the title of the movie in the portal (Cookies, denial, and such vs Cookies, DECEIT, and such). Additionally you had several grammatical errors in the dialogue. However they did not detract too much from the content. Deserves to be in the portal.

Emrox responds:

Title fixed.

Thanks, I actually can't believe I missed that.

Terrible ending.

I was looking forward to something amusing. The ending was pathetic. That was not how a battle of wits would end because the actions chosen were stupid. I thought there would be a real diversion or simply an acceptance of loss. In any case, disappointing, but overall it was very well done except for the lackluster ending.

Emrox responds:

A'ight. I'll try to work on that next time.