Good stuff
Though I'm thinking this is less than historically accurate...I think I may prefer this version of events. XD
Reviews for "Unprecedented"
WooleyWorld responds:
Not meant to be but whatever.
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im british i don't know if i should find this amusing or something to be sad about i just don't know XD
Heh..................................
Just as interesting as when I first saw this on ABS.
Should've been half as long.
Well done, animator. I won't quibble with the art style, although it's not my favorite. The main thing to improve is pacing-there are long dead spaces in the soundtrack, far more than are necessary for comedic timing, or to give us time to see what's happening.
As for the story, it could use framing. Yes, it's random, but try and open with a wide shot: "Lexington/Concorde/Michelle Bachman's brain, c. 1771", or what have you.
And if you're going to take the time to depict period peg legs, why not period grenades? They did have them.
Anyway, Not 2/3 bad. It's the storyboarding and editing that will really polish it up.
WooleyWorld responds:
Lol I was just playing along but I just drew a peg leg I saw fitting. This wasn't made to be accurate.
Honestly I have no idea what 2/3 of your review is about.
Very entertaining
Alright this one has to be some of your better works as it has some longer moments improved "ANIMATION" the the animation itself is not choppy so it was all a plus and I can see some creativity was used in this one as it jumps to some different scenes with some wild moments but thats what I enjoyed about this piece here so nice work and hope you keep making entertaining films like this one.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Really there was nothing to improve on this one it had everything and was a fine film.
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