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Reviews for "Unprecedented"

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Americans and there over inflated misguided historical reenactments lol
Animation was ok though ;)

WooleyWorld responds:

ok.

My rate ish 10/10 because n00bs hates it so thx XD

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Epilogue

"George later became president of the united states of america with Vice President Jesus Christ and created the first amendment "Free beer for everyone". And in 1999 George died of terminal awesomeness.

Good stuff

Though I'm thinking this is less than historically accurate...I think I may prefer this version of events. XD

WooleyWorld responds:

Not meant to be but whatever.

Should've been half as long.

Well done, animator. I won't quibble with the art style, although it's not my favorite. The main thing to improve is pacing-there are long dead spaces in the soundtrack, far more than are necessary for comedic timing, or to give us time to see what's happening.
As for the story, it could use framing. Yes, it's random, but try and open with a wide shot: "Lexington/Concorde/Michelle Bachman's brain, c. 1771", or what have you.
And if you're going to take the time to depict period peg legs, why not period grenades? They did have them.

Anyway, Not 2/3 bad. It's the storyboarding and editing that will really polish it up.

WooleyWorld responds:

Lol I was just playing along but I just drew a peg leg I saw fitting. This wasn't made to be accurate.
Honestly I have no idea what 2/3 of your review is about.