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Reviews for "The Legend of David 5"

Loved it

DIN'S... FIRRRRE!!!!!!

Can I ask you a question...

Whyy the fuck does he look like Charlie Sheen?

Goosebumps.

Glad to see you back, maniacmark. I was worried you stopped with the production.

Three times during this flash animation i got the goosebumps, i felt a large chilled feeling going up my spine. My heartrate raised to atleast twice as normal.

Is there anything you could've done better with this one..? No, i cannot think of anything.

Can't wait for the next one.

With greetings - Eddie.

it's just...

i like the concept but the art and voice acting is irritating. david's voice sounds like somebody being embarrased, and no offence, but the children look like crap

That was good

I just watched all 5 videos.

I can tell that at the beginning of the series you were trying to make a spoof of the Ocarina of Time. Link died inside the deku tree and therefore a new hero was called forth. David was chosen and he carried out his job.

The second was more humor and spoof, killing the annoying navi, and making fun of princess ruto.

By the third one you started getting serious, you added a serious battle and upgraded your quality a bit.

At this point you began working harder and got a bit more serious with the plot. David was chosen, but he wasnt the hero of time, therefore killing ganondorf would prove impossible since he lacked the spirit of the triforce.

In the fourth one, a weird pairing with Malon occured. I can see that you tried saying that he fell for her after saving her, but not much was explained. He battles ganondorf and comes close to defeating him, but then loses because he sacrificed himself for the girl he began having a crush on.

I can tell you want to be original, and you're working harder to make this your own thing. Some people love this. Some people hate it because its a reference of Ocarina of time that went completely off rail, or just simply because its a parody.

The only real advice I could give you is to provide a reason for david's powers and weapons. A mean some of the weapons are a given since most of the ones David has used, he finds before pulling the master sword from its resting place.
But for example, when did he aquire the hookshot and Din's fire?

Its totally cool if you want to turn this series from a gag parody to something serious. But if thats the case then be thorough with it. Even if its because of a lame reason, just explain it. Its better than just have him magically aquire the powers out of thin air.

You got a pretty sweet series going on here. Cant wait to see your next one.

I hope I didnt sound too annoying. Its just that I saw how serious you got with this video. Your drawings upgraded, your backgrounds are a lot better. The voices were in good quality, there was music into it. It was a huge improvement. Hope my review helped at least a bit.