very poetic
this was so nice, like a poem to read. There was not much animation. But i think the bit animation you used was enough to colour your wonderful poem.
The text you wrote was truely poetic, and thats why i liked it. This is real art...
Maybe you should become a poet or a short story author. :)
thanks :)
It's quite beautiful!
This is a quite a beautiful flash!
The narration needs to be a little more emotional (Not over the top! :P).
But I like the animation, and the idea is great!
The characters are drawn beautifully!
The video kind of ends abruptly too, but that's just me.
Great animation!
Happy composing! ~ Wynn
thanks
quite amazing work
Now this is quite amazing, a great work of art. The artwork is done nicely, the style fits the theme. The music ties into the story with perfect sync and the animation ran smoothly. Only it lacks a pre-loader and the voice sounds a little droning.
I wish that you would continue posting your work, this is the first time I got to see anything that you created. But you've made your decision and I respect that. I only hope that you continue with your art, keeping your talent fresh and to strengthen.
I say thanks for sharing this with us and that I hope to see more of your creations appear on NG.
thanks :)
Dont get down!
Don't let poeples' actions put you down. You have the basics of flash down pretty good so far. This website is a great place to show everybody your work, and out of the many trolls that exist all over the internet, there are many more who want nothing more than to comment peacefully and help you out (like me!). Keep postin on here and ignore retards who say hurtful things. They don't mean to hurt you, they just say things to make themselves feel better. Keep it up! :D
nice
the over all story was good and the sound wasn't that bad but the quality of the movie was poor