could use a little more quallity
and this was AMAZINGLY LONG ....
kinda makes it a little tyrering
Reviews for "Morphemon Duelists Ep.2"
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ok....you hav a dick in the vid but not a vegina ?
i onli wonder why its ok to hav a dick in the video but not a vegina ?
i think that was all i wanted to know
PiGPEN responds:
There's no dick in this, what are you even talking about?
potential
there's a lot of potential here.
the biggest problem i see (and probably alot of other people already said this) is the voice acting and the pacing. by that i mean that everything feels a little too slow and drawn out. the animation style and content is whacky so a fast paced delivery would suit this MUCH better. for example look at egorapter's stuff. fast talking and fast cut animation. of course that's the extreme. But i think it would greatly improve if you go more into that direction.
PiGPEN responds:
>fast talking and fast cut animation.
Even Arin doesn't like that shit.
It's amazing how you did all this, the intro/music was cool, if I tried making one I'd embarass the crap out of myself. It was pretty long, and that's a terrible idea for your movies because you lose tons of views/fans, it needs to be divided so people start begging for more (common sense), there were times where I wanted to stop watching, but it was interesting, it had a lot of redundancy though. I liked the genial drama you added to this movie which was sweet, keep up the good work pig, your work in the street fighter was amazingly funny 10/10 humor because it was like 2 kids arguing with eachother, I came to your profile hoping every movie was like that
Wow, if nothing else this Flash has magnitude. Nearly half an hour of solid animation, plus you did a lot of voice work yourself. I don't know what all to say about this - most of the drawings are horribly simplistic, and while some objects are elegantly simplistic, others are not. For a few shots you pay exquisite attention to detail, and yet other times you don't. This is so oddly inconsistent I really don't know what to review.
On the issue of the story, I really can't say I enjoyed it at all - watching seemed mostly like a waste of time. Your rap battles tend to be a lot more animated and immediately interesting, whereas this took a very long time to say very little. I'd have to say my favorite part of the animation was the stories at the end, except even then I didn't really like it that much - more like it just held my interest.
There's a definite style here, but you need to take advantage of it and make it work better for you. Part of this comes from how little music there is in this - adjusting the animation to how silent and devoid of energy this animation is would be critical to improving it. The mumbled voices and faded colors made me think of Napoleon Dynamite, only you try too hard to incorporate a narrative and it takes away from the final product.