ok this was different
It was great animation, but I didn't understand what was really happening. Try story boarding and creating something with substance. The music was good. A little to loud though, I had to turn down my speakers to stop them from blowing out.
Yeah. Ill have to agree on the story telling.
I've worked on the animation more than on the presentation. Sorry for not making it clear.
Understood
It's too sketchy but animation is drawn out with some details. Hard to understand by most people
right
its not that special